And not just...
...just waiting for their turn to speak?
Yeah.

I like it nonlinear. I'm bored with sentences that connect, one to the next. That's too easy. Make it read backwards, fractal, any way you link it. Half the words are missing, all the details implied, invisible but there. Clearly. Fluorescent sun, incandescent moon, sweet as fruit. No passive readers, mellow tone and 3, 2, 1, let's jam.